In first-person narration, write at least two paragraphs of exposition from this character's point-of-view. Who are they? What is their backstory?
(Remember a paragraph is between four and seven sentences.)
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Will
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Hi! I'm Emily Child, which I think is pretty funny for a kid like me to say. Anyway, I'm eight years old and I'm lost. I'm not exactly sure where my family is. Could you tell me if you saw them anywhere? I lost them when I was walking through the woods. My mommy has long dark hair and a really pretty smile. My daddy is kind of tall and wears these really funny glasses, and he has this stick thingy that he leans on a lot.
We were supposed to be visiting my grandma in the middle of the woods to bring her some food, but then they kind of just disappeared when we crossed the river. I'm not sure what happened, but I'll keep heading to my grandma's like they told me. This red hood is actually one that she made me, dyed with some berries that she found, but I lost that too. I should get going again... Well, I hope you have a good day Mr. Wolf!
I am slender man's daughter I come from an twenty first dimension. My dad retired in the third dimension's late 1970's, because Cain also known as Bigfoot my dad's brother fought with my dad and tore off his appendages that he used to sneak up so silently behind his unsuspecting victims. So he married ET's sister and made me so I could continue to do my father's job, and keep up the family business. I usually abduct my playmates here I the third dimension so I can take them home and play with them, because I get really lonely, because after about a year in our dimension they will die and so I keep acquiring, new friends. I have to live a hard life- but don't pity me or you'll end up my slave, and I will have no other choice but to feed you to my dad's brother, the zombie wolf man. You might as well get to know my name- because if you don't your next. My name is Debbie. Oh by the way don't be so surprised if you find your heart torn out and broken into pieces.
My name is Aiwa. I'm not a normal mortal. Our planet is a small one, but a very populated one. Which is why we took Earth as our home. We're called Helli we are like humans only with less restrictions. We can jump at incredible heights and swim for long lengths of time while at incredible speeds, etc. I have brown hair and grayish blues eyes. My skin is a deep tan and it makes me look like one of those girls from California, the surfer humans. I usually braid my hair straight down my back and I look 8 or 9 but I'm actually 15 and I'll always be this way. We don't age in looks much, but I'll most likely live to be in my 300's. We can live longer if we are granted the permission, but usually we go around there.
The convenience I like most about my powers is the aura reading. I can tell someone's mood just by looking at someone. They'd have a, well, aura around them. Most off all I like the piece we keep in our lives, that's me anyways.
Hi my name is Emma, I am 11 years old , both of my parents died in a horrible car accident. Ever since then I have moved from foster home to foster home just hoping to find the right family. When I finally found this perfect family I was 16 years old. They gave me the world, and they loved me.
But I found out they have a horrible second life. So one day I was wandering down the hall of the house and I tripped over the rug in the hall way and I seen that there was a cut in hardwood floor, so I pulled back the rug and found a hidden door, as I opened the door I smelt something horrible.
So as I went down the old concrete stairs the smells got worse and worse. When I got to the end of the stairs there was a door. On the other side of the door I could hear people crying and whispering. And just as I opened the door my foster dad grabbed me from behind and punched me in the face. Then I woke up tied to a chair with my foster parents standing there watching me.
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Hi! I'm Emily Child, which I think is pretty funny for a kid like me to say. Anyway, I'm eight years old and I'm lost. I'm not exactly sure where my family is. Could you tell me if you saw them anywhere? I lost them when I was walking through the woods. My mommy has long dark hair and a really pretty smile. My daddy is kind of tall and wears these really funny glasses, and he has this stick thingy that he leans on a lot.
We were supposed to be visiting my grandma in the middle of the woods to bring her some food, but then they kind of just disappeared when we crossed the river. I'm not sure what happened, but I'll keep heading to my grandma's like they told me. This red hood is actually one that she made me, dyed with some berries that she found, but I lost that too. I should get going again... Well, I hope you have a good day Mr. Wolf!
I am slender man's daughter I come from an twenty first dimension. My dad retired in the third dimension's late 1970's, because Cain also known as Bigfoot my dad's brother fought with my dad and tore off his appendages that he used to sneak up so silently behind his unsuspecting victims. So he married ET's sister and made me so I could continue to do my father's job, and keep up the family business. I usually abduct my playmates here I the third dimension so I can take them home and play with them, because I get really lonely, because after about a year in our dimension they will die and so I keep acquiring, new friends. I have to live a hard life- but don't pity me or you'll end up my slave, and I will have no other choice but to feed you to my dad's brother, the zombie wolf man. You might as well get to know my name- because if you don't your next. My name is Debbie.
Oh by the way don't be so surprised if you find your heart torn out and broken into pieces.
My name is Aiwa. I'm not a normal mortal. Our planet is a small one, but a very populated one. Which is why we took Earth as our home. We're called Helli we are like humans only with less restrictions. We can jump at incredible heights and swim for long lengths of time while at incredible speeds, etc. I have brown hair and grayish blues eyes. My skin is a deep tan and it makes me look like one of those girls from California, the surfer humans. I usually braid my hair straight down my back and I look 8 or 9 but I'm actually 15 and I'll always be this way. We don't age in looks much, but I'll most likely live to be in my 300's. We can live longer if we are granted the permission, but usually we go around there.
The convenience I like most about my powers is the aura reading. I can tell someone's mood just by looking at someone. They'd have a, well, aura around them. Most off all I like the piece we keep in our lives, that's me anyways.
Hi my name is Emma, I am 11 years old , both of my parents died in a horrible car accident. Ever since then I have moved from foster home to foster home just hoping to find the right family. When I finally found this perfect family I was 16 years old. They gave me the world, and they loved me.
But I found out they have a horrible second life. So one day I was wandering down the hall of the house and I tripped over the rug in the hall way and I seen that there was a cut in hardwood floor, so I pulled back the rug and found a hidden door, as I opened the door I smelt something horrible.
So as I went down the old concrete stairs the smells got worse and worse. When I got to the end of the stairs there was a door. On the other side of the door I could hear people crying and whispering. And just as I opened the door my foster dad grabbed me from behind and punched me in the face. Then I woke up tied to a chair with my foster parents standing there watching me.
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