The scene should be at least three paragraphs. Skip a line between each paragraph to make the changes clear. Use punctuation. (Remember a paragraph is four to seven sentences.)
Thursday, June 19, 2014
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The scene should be at least three paragraphs. Skip a line between each paragraph to make the changes clear. Use punctuation. (Remember a paragraph is four to seven sentences.)
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A women and child lived here the father went to war. He never came back, the women and child were now treated as out cast. The women worked, and the child was with her sister on the out side of town. The child never really saw his mother, and he started calling his aunt mommy. The women was so upset and told her to teach him the difference, and the aunt tried to teach him he wouldn't listen.
The child found himself in trouble a lot because, he would call the aunt, mommy. The child finally realized that she was the aunt, not mom. The women was happy with her sister and loved her with all her heart, again. The child never called his aunt, mommy and his mom was so proud of him.
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