The scene should be at least three paragraphs. Skip a line between each paragraph to make the changes clear. Use punctuation. (Remember a paragraph is four to seven sentences.)
Thursday, June 19, 2014
Setting Journal Write
The scene should be at least three paragraphs. Skip a line between each paragraph to make the changes clear. Use punctuation. (Remember a paragraph is four to seven sentences.)
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The place you are seeing is ofhart it is in freshlandia the house you are seeing was a mansion on a hill in the center of ofhart. it housed a kind little family the father built the mansion in 2026, and lived in it for 30 years, But then a horrible plague rid the land it killed off half of the worlds population. this plague originated in this mansion!
The father johackus was a famous scientist. The plague originated after a failed experiment for trying to find a cure to hiveo, but he mutated the disease hiveo into an even more deadly and contagious disease.
After 30 years of the disease it has began to mutate and turn humans into the undead now it is a war to save the last of mankind....
Year after year, Mr. Banks house seems to become worse with age. It has been abandon for nearly 70 years. No one is really sure what had happen to Mr. Banks. Some suspect he died with old age but his ghost remains in the house. No one has been to his house until now.....
Candice had just moved to the town Beaver, Utah. Candice first thoughts of the house is how old and wreck this house is. What kind of house has a graveyard? She can't believe she had just moved here away from her friends back in California. She had thought this house look gave that spooky eerie feeling.
"Candice could you please help and unload your stuff from the car." Candice's mom pleaded.
"Sure." She shrugged
As Candice moved her stuff to her new room. She can't help the fact that she felt someone is observing her. She didn't too much of it thinking it a new house, new environment. She starts to unpack her stuff. She notices a strange figure in the graveyard. The figure with covered in a black dress with a black veil over her face. Then her lamp suddenly fell to the floor. Candice turn around and wonder how did it fall.
"Shoot!" She yelled.
As she went to look back at the window, the strange figure had disappeared. Candice just thought it was just a hallucination.
As Candice is putting her clothes away in her closet she notices that the wall seems to be uneven. She slipped her fingers between the cracks and pulls off the fake wall.
There are some eerie stairs heading down what look like a cellar. With her curiosity she decided to go down. She grabs a flashlight and slowly walks down the stairs. As she is going down this musty dusty smell appears out of no where.
By the time she goes down the stairs she sees a table tied down with chains. The walls are covered in many different tools. Candice can't believe she was seeing saws, chainsaw ,knives. Anything that was a tool was in there.
As soon as Candice touches the table she has like a flashback of this poor weak young girl getting beaten by an old man.
Candice wonder why. She had even pleaded the man to stop but it was no use the man couldn't hear her.
Could Candice have unlock the mysterious secret that lies between this house or could she have unlocked a curse?
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