The scene should be at least three paragraphs. Skip a line between each paragraph to make the changes clear. Use punctuation. (Remember a paragraph is four to seven sentences.)
Thursday, June 19, 2014
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The scene should be at least three paragraphs. Skip a line between each paragraph to make the changes clear. Use punctuation. (Remember a paragraph is four to seven sentences.)
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A man was in the elevator and his ex wife came in, and they thought is was awkward. The women started small talk, and the man was trying to be calm but he blew up. The man was so angry with her just because she left him for their boss. The women started blown up on him and he was quit.
The boss came and the women kissed him and the man just stood there. The boss asked what happened and he said he didn't know. The women asked the man why he did that in the elevator. The man was confused why she came to see him again. The boss came and asked them what happened today. They both left and never talked again, the boss and the women are still together, but the man is still alone.
"It's getting hard to breathe" said the lady
"Yeah we've been stuck in this elevator forever" said the man.
I'm getting worried.
"Shhh" said the man.
"Don't tell me what to do"
" well I'm trying too listen and you won't be quiet " said the man.
"They know we're in here they have too" she said
It started as a normal day but it got
Progressively worse and worse after a bump on my head and woke up in a elevator as each floor of my conscious mind seeing my past deeds create an abomination seeing what I have become. Man kind is self corrupting organism as It slowly rots away...... isn't that right edger .
"don't ask me Mr.Davidson ask your self ".
"I am..... Why are we in a elevator edger" ?
"Because , the narrator wants you to be here".
The elevator suddenly stopped. The intercom came on with an alarm, "warning, biohazard leak in the building. All system lockdown" over and over. We heard a big crash on the top of the elevator. There was at least 10 people in the elevator along with me.
We heard what sounded like moaning after the big crash. One of the guys in the elevator offered to get up on top and see what it was. We helped boost him up to the hatch. He slowly opened it. He was taken back by what he saw...
"It's a person! We half to help him get down and get help!"
"Is it really a person?"
"Yes! It looks like he fell quite a ways down"
"Get him down then! We'll help him!"
We took him down and looked at him. He had several broken bones. His eyes were wide open. They were pure white. All we could see was his pupils. It looked like he was dead, but he was breathing.
You are seeing the elevator to the underground chamber under the white house it is 200 feet underground holding the most important man in the world. Then the door opens and you see the president of the untied states.
Washington D.C. Has just been bombed, and the rest of the U.S. Is under attack. The Taliban have become a lot stronger ever since they made a treaty with Russia that got them many nuclear weapons. Now they are using them on us.
As the president and his men plan an attack on the Taliban they are slowly taking out state by state in the us and they are still moving I am afraid that the U.S? Has met their match.
O'ryan and his mom were at the hospital because his brother got shot two times. They didn't know what to think because they tried to get him to get out of his gang but he wouldn't listen. So look where we are, at the hospital with my little brother in critical condition. Me and my mom can't stand looking at him so we leave and instead of the stairs like we usually take we take the elevator for my mom.
"Im gonna be late to meeting" said Tiffany
She hurried into the elevator. Tiffany was standing there impatiently watching each of the floors light up. Next to her was a guy that worked from Dominos. He seemed he was making a delivering to one of the clients in the building.
By the time they got to the 42 floor, "BANG!"
Tiffany and the dominos guy look at each other and wonder what was that noise. The elevator had stopped.
"What else could go wrong?" Groaned Tiffany.
"Looks like we are gonna stuck here a while. My name is Nick."
"Tiffany, nice to meet you"
Minutes and then hours went by and nothing. No one had notice there absent. While Nick and Tiffany were stuck they got to know each other and started telling their background story to each other. Which is weird cause usually you don't tell a complete stranger you past. But Tiffany could trust Nick in that instant.
"Hungry" offered Nick
"Sure, I will have a slice of pizza "
"Guess what I have in my pocket ?" Said Nick
" A napkin?"
"No a two liter Mountain Dew "
"Strange and that fit your pocket"
"Yeah"
They eventually had a good time being stuck in the elevator.They had a pizza party!
The after 5 hours later Nick had realized he had a cell phone.
Great
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